portugueseGB wrote:Loved it! Great job on the paranormal scene (it looked and felt more like I wished GB I and II ghosts had looked). And I liked how you created scenes that made me relate emotionally to the characters. The wife scene, for example, was very good. Also the scene showing the boss worried about their team mates and calling the investigation off but then feeling he had to do something about it himself. Very nice. In the previous webisodes I didn't like him too much but this scene changed that. If I can try constructive criticism, the facial expressions sometimes feel somewhat exagerated. I am not sure if its me or anyone else agrees with me. The rookie character felt the most natural on this episode. The jump to new york was a surprise, another storyline unfolds. All in all it's fantastic. Can't wait for the next episode.
Your comments and criticism are very much welcome and appreciated!
I have to say, though, that I feel kinda lucky in that my character isn't actually a character. What you're seeing in the series is not at all far from what I'm like in real life, which makes being "in character" that much easier.
bpontheair wrote:As far as the facial expressions (from my standpoint), I wish I could say that's me exaggerating. I'm actually pretty expressive in real life. Even my daughter inherited my eye movements. Not that it's a good thing...
No kidding! I go on long car rides to events with this guy on a pretty frequent basis, so I can tell you (from the times when I'm not asleep) he's got one goofy looking mug when not on camera and his daughter is the same way. Only difference is that she's a lot more adorable than he is... (Make no mistake, he's still adorable)